Reviews for Frozen Fire by Tim Bowler - winner 2008

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Jessica
Year 9
St Richard's Catholic College

I really like this book because, from the first sentence, it captivates you and you have to read on.

When Dusty gets a strange phone call from a boy, who she believes may know something about the disappearance of her brother Josh, she is determined to find him. But there are lots of rumours about the boys past, can he be trusted…?

I really liked the ending of this book because just as you think you know where the plot is heading, it twists off in another direction. It was unpredictable, surprising and a great read!


Rosie
Year 9
St Richard's Catholic College

Dusty’s brother has been missing for ages and it has torn her family apart. Her mother has left, and her father needs a job; but when she gets a strange phone call how can she ignore it. Something strange is pulling her towards the unknown boy…

I really enjoyed this book. I thought that the plot was original and fast moving with excellent suspense and description. The author kept you guessing at each stage in the book.

The author portrayed Dusty really well, and related to the reader and made them feel part of the book. The novel captured the feelings and emotions of the characters and made it such and enjoyable read.

I also thought that the ending had an excellent twist to it; it left no loose ends and surprised you at the same time. I would mainly recommend this to older readers as it is quite complex.

I would give this book 10/10.

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Charlotte
Year 9
Brighton & Hove High School

I liked this book very much. It had a good story line and the author’s writing style seemed to bring its characters to life somehow. The first page really gets you into the story when Dusty gets a phone call from a mysterious boy, a phone call she knows she can’t ignore. You wonder if she will find him and if she will ever see her missing brother again. This book really gripped me, and it gave me a good idea of how Dusty felt when she lost her brother and when she went through all her scrapes. My overall conclusion is that this book is a really good read and well worth reading, if you like books with a bit of mystery.


Lucy
Year 8
St Richard's Catholic College

This is a story of a girl who discovered a mysterious boy with a whole trail of mysteries following him where ever he went.
This story starts off with a simple phone call from a boy who said he was dying. Dusty could not ignore it. She was surprised to find she knew a lot about Josh which meant Dusty had to find the boy no matter what.
There were many haunting and strange things about him when they finally met. He had powers that no other person possessed, he had the power to see people’s thoughts and feel what other people feel just by thinking of them.
Because of all this Dusty gets involved in many adventures and events which involved many different people including: the police, mad parents and angry townspeople. Dusty has a new surprise around every corner; she turns trying to pick up the mysteries and rumours that the boy has left behind in his trail. She finds it a challenge but at the end she has sorted her mind out and with her new friend she is fine.


Louise
Year 8
St Richard's Catholic College

I was never really drawn to this book because of its cover; it really didn’t make me want to read it, but the content was brilliant. Now I’ve actually read the book properly I think it’s good and quite spooky!

Dusty lives with her dad after her brother, Josh, went missing and her mum moved out. One evening she gets a phone call from a strange boy who asks her to call him Josh. Dusty is shaken after her phone call and goes to find the boy. While she is out looking for him she realizes that she has got herself into a tricky situation…

I would recommend this book to any of my friends who are about 12 +.


Ursula
Year 8
Helenswood

Wow!

This book is truly amazing. It has an great story line and one big question comes along with it - what made him come up with this???

It includes the need to know more which I call a "thirst-for-a-book". The book ends with a bang which i look for in a book.

Overall reaction:

Loved it!

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Katie W
Year 9
Brighton & Hove High School

This book was weird, but I still liked it. I couldn’t put it down. The only thing I didn’t like was when it went on and on about the snow in literally every paragraph. At first I thought it would be just another one of those books with a girl looking for her lost brother, but it became really mysterious when the strange boy came into it, and he knew about the girl’s missing brother. It was a strange, mysterious, magical, sort of scary, excellent book. I would definitely recommend this book to anyone.


Rory Mckeown
Age 14
Brighton College

I enjoyed every page of this book. Tim Bowler has succeeded in creating an original thriller. The novel had many strange twists to it. My imagination just kept going and going. The characters were original and believable. I loved the contrast in strong action and a sad story. All these components put together made a magnificent novel, winning me over and I’m sure other teenagers.


Sam
Year 8
St Richard's Catholic College

This book was a really good read and like most of the books in the Southern School book awards I would recommend it to anyone. The story line is similar to another one of the Southern School books but they weren’t overly similar. In this book a strong-minded girl called Dusty looses her brother, Josh. He was always known to be a rebel and everyone still always loved him. He would walk out for days at time without explanation and would come back when he pleased. This time it’s different, Josh calls Dusty when she’s home alone and says this is the last time they’ll ever talk. His final words are repeated constantly throughout the book: “I’m sorry little Dusty, goodbye little Dusty.”

His disappearance ravages their family and Dusty’s mother leaves. Just as Dusty and her Dad are beginning to see the light at the end of the tunnel, disaster strikes! A mysterious figure enters the picture, one who knows something about Josh, one who Dusty is desperate to talk to. I loved this book and I think most people will.


Esther
Year 9
Peacehaven Community School

A gripping story. I really wanted to know who the mysterious boy was. It kept me reading and had a nice use of atmosphere.

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Patrick
Year 10
St Richard's Catholic College

This book, like Broken Soup lacked a full storyline and unlike Broken Soup I didn’t find any other real possible purpose for it to have been written. It is entirely possible I missed it, but then I’m afraid the writer has failed in portraying their message. Although, I’m sure if you are the author, you will be happy to know that I did think the writing style and character structures were good. These skills just need to be applied to a better plot.
Suitable for age 12+, boys and girls.
I give it 68/100

Harriet
Year 9
Brighton & Hove High School

This book is definitely not a book to read before bed. This haunting story was enough to keep me awake all night. I liked this story, the characters were really imaginable and I was always able to understand what was happening very easily.

The author’s style of writing kept me interested; I think this was because each chapter ended with a cliff hanger, making me want to read on.

The front cover of the book I found slightly strange. I felt that the main idea of the figure walking was a good one, but the figure should have been clearer and definitely wearing a duffel coat with its hood up.

Overall this is my favourite book so far!


Alice B
Year 9
Brighton & Hove High School

Overall I liked this book. I thought it was well paced, the beginning getting straight to the point, and well written. The mystery element was very good and kept you gripped. The only thing I would say about it was I think there should have been more answers at the end, like where the boy was from and why the snow, paper and ocarina kept glowing. I did find it’s pace slacking a little in the middle which is a shame but the beginning and end made it still worth reading. I found the characters quite believable and there was good character development. I think the ending had the good confrontation that was needed and the two twists were good for two different reasons. The boy surviving was good as you sort of expected it, then when you thought he was dead it gave you quite a shock. When it turned out he did indeed live, it was a pleasant surprise. The twist with her brother was good as it was so unexpected. There was only one thing I didn’t understand, when Angelica got raped she said her rapist had white hair, Josh did not have white hair. It was these kinds of unanswered questions that I felt let it down, but I did like it a lot.

Annie
Year 8
St Richard's Catholic College

This is a very touching book that I have read before that highlights how when someone you love dies you will never get over it, but when Dusty gets the phone call she is refilled with an urge to find her brother but the story has a sad ending. He committed suicide and her memory of her brother is fogged by the new and terrible information she has received from the mysterious boy.


Hannah
Year 9
Hove Park School

I liked this book very much. It was a very spooky book and the plot was excellent. From the very first line I pictured the atmosphere and it somehow made the characters come to life. The book was so gripping it made me feel like I was standing the middle of the scenes watching it all happen. In my opinion, I feel like I should have saved this book until last because it inspired me so much. I think if I had the chance I would read it again.

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Abby
Year 9
Hurstpierpoint College

From the moment I read the first words, it captivated me and I could not put the book down. It was so gripping and the best thing about it was the description used: it almost felt as if you were there, with Dusty, willing her to find out the mystery and to find the boy. The book was magical and the writer was great at building a tense atmostphere and creating an intriguing mystery. It is definately a book to be read and my favourite book I have read so far. But save the book until last: save the best until last, which is what I wish I had done. Spine-tingling, intriguing, spooky mystery, a definate good-read that will wrap you up in drama and magic and one that will make you feel every emotion.


Grace
Year 8
St Richard's Catholic College

Dusty’s life is in tatters, suspended in a condition of grief. Her enticing and wayward brother, Josh, has been missing for two years. Her parents, broken by loss, have separated; Dusty lives with her father in a cottage isolated in a cold, icy, Cumbrian landscape. One winter night, her mobile rings. The caller uses the name Josh, although he is not her brother. He also seems to know what Dusty is thinking and doing. Believing that he must be watching the cottage, Dusty goes out into the night and follows footprints she finds in the snow; they lead her to a number of threatening confrontations. The caller, it seems, is a bizarre and dangerous boy, accused of, among other things, rape. He is being hunted by both police and vengeful vigilantes. Dusty, obsessed by the idea that he knows the truth about her brother - or that in some unimaginable and awful way he might be her brother - tries to protect him and realises she is in more trouble than she thinks…
This book was a brilliant, astounding thriller; I couldn’t put it down! It was gripping and contained everything that makes a great story. The only problem I discovered was that is was a bit long and could have been shorter but overall I enjoyed the book!
I rate this book an 8/10!

James
Year 9
Hurstpierpoint College

This book was a very good, gripping book. It was slightly believable and it did start off with a bang. Towards the end it does describe everything and make it all understandable. It is a book with a gripping atmosphere. I thoroughly enjoyed this book and, if I had the chance, would read it again.

Claudia
Year 9
Beacon Community College

Frozen Fire is a very exciting book; it’s about a girl called Dusty who gets a phone call late at night from a strange boy. Dusty gets a feeling she must find this boy because he knows something about her missing brother. But when Dusty meets the boy, he is very mysterious and has a power no one else has. The more she finds out about him, the more danger she’s putting herself into.

Jordan
Year 9
Beacon Community College

This book is consistently gripping and believable. It’s a very original idea and really focuses on how Dusty stays by the mysterious boy, through thick and thin because she can tell that he is very disturbed and in trouble, and that he really needs her by his side all the time.

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Emmeline
Year 9
Beacon Community College

This book was really hard to put down, I enjoyed it very much, it had a good pace, even though it only took place over a few days. Dusty wasn’t that much of an appealing character, she was missing her brother too much and it took away any aspects of her personality. I wanted to know more about the boy, but we only got a few brief meetings and that explained little about what he was. It had a rather unsatisfying end, that though it was unpredictable, it didn’t really answer all the questions. I would like to have known about Dusty before she became so detached and a full explanation on why her brother left, but I still loved it and would recommend it.


Rhiannon
Year 8
Beacon Community College

It’s very interesting, but at points it is very confusing and hard to understand. The name fits the story and the blurb makes it sound very exciting and fast paced. It is original in the sense that the characters are quite hard to believe and the things they do and say aren’t very realistic. I enjoyed it but I wouldn’t really tell other people to read it and if I didn’t have to I wouldn’t have read all of it.


Megan
Year 9
Beacon Community College

I really enjoyed it. I could understand what the character was going through and their personality. The writer really gripped my attention all the way through. Questions filled my head which I wanted answered. I didn’t want to put the book down. The plot for the story was really original which is what kept me reading; I didn’t know what to expect. The title confused me at first but as I progressed through the book it started to make sense. The atmosphere of curiosity and anger went hand in hand and made the story more real. I would recommend this book to teenagers.


Megan
Year 10
St Richard's Catholic College

'Frozen Fire' intrigued me from the very first sentences. It's such a mysterious book and you're never quite sure exactly what’s going on. The storyline is very original although sometimes overly dramatic. It was quite fast-paced as well; I was always gripped in one plot or another. However, it wasn't always that realistic and occasionally I couldn't get completely engrossed in the story because I just couldn’t imagine it happening.
I really enjoyed reading about the strange boy, I thought he was such an ingenious character and I was fascinated by him. He seemed really sensitive and gentle but there was an impression from him that made you a bit wary and want to keep your distance. The author gave you just enough information to engage you but not enough so you were always left wondering about him. I also thought Dusty was a well-written character, she was extremely feisty but her vulnerability also shone through at the right moments.
I really enjoyed 'Frozen Fire', it was incredibly tense at times and I could feel myself get more and more involved and wanting to help the characters. The author portrayed a vivid image of the events that occurred and I could really imagine myself in those situations and empathise with the characters.
Rating: 8-9/10


Hui Liu
Age 14
Brighton College

A young girl receives a phone call late at night from a mysterious boy which leads to a series of events spiralling further and further from reality. The boy seems to know something about her missing brother, yet makes no move to help her in the search.

The book has a very ethereal, almost spooky atmosphere to it, as has all the works of Bowler, yet everyone can empathise with Dusty as she struggles to repress distant memories of her brother. Although the plot is rather unrealistic, the characters and motivations behind each move are believable and the pace never slows.

The reading of every book is a journey, and this was a most memorable and thrilling one to partake in.


Connor
Year 8
St Richard's Catholic College

This weird but wonderful book is full of twists and turns, and contains one of the most obscure story lines ever.
Follow the story of Dusty, a teenage girl with a knack of getting into fights. One night, she gets a phone call from a dying boy who apparently just thought of her phone number. Only this boy is special; this boy knows about Dusty’s brother, Josh.
This is a dangerous time; mobs are forming to dish out some vigilante justice to the boy, as he is supposed to have violated a girl repeatedly. Should Dusty believe these rumours? Or should she ignore them in pursuit of her only brother?

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Callum
Age 13
Brighton College

Tim Bowler’s novel “Frozen Fire” is a gripping book which is fast paced and involves the reader superbly.

Dusty, a girl who is the main character, receives a mysterious ‘phone call from a boy who is trying to kill himself at the time and he starts using words and phrases that Dusty’s brother Josh used. Dusty becomes determined to find this boy because she is convinced that he would know where Josh is. When Dusty finds herself in a dangerous situation, she knows that to be connected with this boy is dangerous. Throughout the novel Tim Bowler uses great description and keeps the boy hidden and mysterious until the very end. He builds up tension every time and always includes the smallest detail which I think makes it a great book.


Lily
Year 9
Roedean School

It starts with a mysterious call from an unknown boy. He says he is dying, but Dusty soon finds that he has other information that is very important to her. As she is drawn deeper into the mystery she finds her own life in danger. Dusty wants the answers, but what of the boys past? Can she trust him at all?

I thought this was an amazing book, it was quite thought provoking. It was thrilling and mysterious all the way through. Tim Bowler really knows how to write a good book! I would give it 9/10 for the great plot, originality and ability to grip the reader to the very last page.


Charlotte
Year 9
St Richard's Catholic College

When Dusty receives the phone call from the strange boy she feels she cannot ignore it. He says only things that her brother says and her brother went missing a few years ago. This strange boy has taken an overdose and wants a kind voice to listen to while he dies. Dusty thinks that is fair enough but why her and how did he get her number? Dusty decides to go out to the place where he is, the park. She gets there but there’s no sign of the boy. She can hear barking and footsteps behind her and realizes she’s being chased. She gets confronted by some horrible people who are connecting her to the boy. But she doesn’t know him. These people never leave her alone and as she gets closer to the boy, he’s not in danger, she is.
I really enjoyed this book it was beautifully written. The character Dusty was really good to think and read about. She is such an intriguing character and her search for the boy is almost frustrating because you want her to find him. I enjoyed the plot and the all little twists he put into it. I would definitely recommend this book to everyone.
I really enjoyed it so I am giving it 10/10.


Connie
Age 13
St Leonards Mayfield

I thought that Frozen Fire, was a gripping thriller that was subsequently a page turner. I have to say that despite being a good book it was not brilliantly written. The book is written in a style that builds tension effectively, yet uses a simple dialogue to do this and does not really stretch the reader.

Despite the above I really enjoyed the book and thought that it had a very good storyline that encouraged me to keep reading throughout. Jolly


Connie
Age 13
St Leonards Mayfield

I thought that Frozen Fire, was a gripping thriller that was subsequently a page turner. I have to say that despite being a good book it was not brilliantly written. The book is written in a style that builds tension effectively, yet uses a simple dialogue to do this and does not really stretch the reader.

Despite the above I really enjoyed the book and thought that it had a very good storyline that encouraged me to keep reading throughout. Jolly good a spiffing book!


Niamh
Year 9
Brighton & Hove High School

There is no other way to describe this book, apart from the word epic. It combines a tantalizing recipe of mystery, fear, magic, climaxes, obsessions and stunning imagery to satisfy the hungriest of readers.

You can’t fail to have this book welded to your eyes, because it is just so un-putdownable. The author is definitely talented, keeping us on the edge of our seats with the cleverly intertwined stories.

At first, we think that this is an ordinary story of a young teenager’s quest to find her lost brother, but it turns to a magical tale when a mysterious boy comes into the plot. The author I think really sets the scene in the book to reflect the unknown boy and the girl’s feelings, by having it snowing all of the time. The girl is empty and lost without her brother whereas the boy is cold distant, deadly and also has a pale complexion and appearance. Then the tale turns from mystery to adventure and fear as the boy may have committed a serious crime. The girl gets tangled up in the story, (in ways I can’t say because it would give the whole plot away!) mystified and curious, as the boy seems to know something of her missing brother. Then the crime is revealed, (and so is the boy!) the main mysteries are solved, but you can’t help finishing the book with a lot of unanswered questions. What sort of magic was it? Why was the boy like that and how? What really happened?

And so I definitely recommend this book to any avid reader, looking for a good book to curl up with inside on cold winter nights, but beware, it might just make you keep glancing out of the window at people with hooded coats…


Joseph
Year 9
St Richard's Catholic College

Dusty is in a kind of limbo, kept there by grief – grief at the loss of her charismatic brother Josh, whose body has still not been found. Her parents have divorced, too bitter to live together anymore. She lives with her dad in an isolated cottage. One night, her mobile phone rings, and a mysterious and dangerous boy appears in her life…

I found the idea excellent and original, but sometimes the emotional state of Dusty is just too much. The snow is brilliant in this, serving as a blank canvas for the actions taking place. However when the ghost boy appears, the emotion is fully justified and vividly described.

All in all, this is an engrossing, psychological thriller, excellently written, but occasionally with too much description to wade through, however beautifully described.

4/5

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